its not being a dick to comment like that.I wasnt there but theres holes all through this then we crossed the border at Toronto.and i got a book here right in front of me by a james n frey a very famous book called how to write a damn good novel and in it he encourages all writers to join a group,even on line(tho he doesnt say that the book was written in 1987) and he divvies up the various style groups and encourages destructive groups.groups that care enough about writing to be honest.anyways itd be cool if Monnsr Matt would comment himself.I like the story myself,Im pretty familiar with that sort of stuff and I just see huge huge holes in that Toronto thing.Its like red flag holes....