I'd like to suggest a copy edit to the latter portion of the second (dependent) clause in the sentence about Bryony Dixon. I believe you should add an article in front of "US . . ." I suggest you rewrite it in one of two possible ways:
either
" . . . a U.S. think tank, Civilization Works." (leaving in the comma)
or
" . . . the U.S. think tank Civilization Works." (taking out the comma)
You might also want to consider adding a link to "Civilization Works."
Just a suggestion.
Jul 26, 2024
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2:23 AM
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