"This is a collaborative effort where each of us has the power to alter the future. The question is, how can we work together to figure out a worthwhile ending?" >> Bwahahaha... That IS the question, ain't it? :D
Well, at least your ending is perfect for what I have in mind for Chapter 11 haha. Should be fun.
I just read the entire story at one sitting and I couldn’t put it down. This must be a lot of fun for the writers but it’s even more fun for us, the readers. I really liked this chapter as it helped me follow the story more. Wow, this is so crazy 😜 and I can’t wait to find out what’s really going on here.
Wow, this was so inventive, and your dialogue is always so sharp and true to life. Well done! Now I have some catching up to do... but I had to read this first :-)
😂 Found myself sipping on a Woodford’s Reserve whilst reading your chapter. Hadn’t realised I’d bought a bottle and hadn’t realised I’d opened it. Some strange back-flows going on round here!
For a moment there, I though Marty McFly may have swooped in on a hover board!
With Joey now the author of his own story, it suggests that we are all the author of our own unwritten life stories! Thanks for the empowering nature of that thought!
You did such a good job with Mr. Grisly, it makes me want a spin-off with him and Joey. And so much actually happens here (those time skip/shootout scenes were fantastic), I'm very impressed with how well it all flows. Very well done, Winston!
The Grisly Ghosts of Gruesome Time - Chapter 10
"This is a collaborative effort where each of us has the power to alter the future. The question is, how can we work together to figure out a worthwhile ending?" >> Bwahahaha... That IS the question, ain't it? :D
Well, at least your ending is perfect for what I have in mind for Chapter 11 haha. Should be fun.
All I'll say is... expect the unexpected.
I just read the entire story at one sitting and I couldn’t put it down. This must be a lot of fun for the writers but it’s even more fun for us, the readers. I really liked this chapter as it helped me follow the story more. Wow, this is so crazy 😜 and I can’t wait to find out what’s really going on here.
Wow, this was so inventive, and your dialogue is always so sharp and true to life. Well done! Now I have some catching up to do... but I had to read this first :-)
😂 Found myself sipping on a Woodford’s Reserve whilst reading your chapter. Hadn’t realised I’d bought a bottle and hadn’t realised I’d opened it. Some strange back-flows going on round here!
Master Code. Outlandish! The very thought of it. Nice follow and set up, Winston. We’re all minions of ‘Mr Grisly’s logic’ now!!
For a moment there, I though Marty McFly may have swooped in on a hover board!
With Joey now the author of his own story, it suggests that we are all the author of our own unwritten life stories! Thanks for the empowering nature of that thought!
You did such a good job with Mr. Grisly, it makes me want a spin-off with him and Joey. And so much actually happens here (those time skip/shootout scenes were fantastic), I'm very impressed with how well it all flows. Very well done, Winston!
You’re welcome! I also loved the bub for my reasons and of course, for Wolverine.
Nice! Lots of layers and action and I LOVE the larger role for Mr. Grisly!