I appreciate how specific you are about the things you find. I’m always sort of bothered when people generalize in their writing - e.g., outside the car window I saw stray dogs and garbage. How many stray dogs? What garbage? 2. We planted some new trees and things at my house this year and had to water to help them establish during the hot summer. One time, when water started to collect on the sidewalk, a wasp came to drink from it. It was the first time I saw a wasp do something that I didn’t perceive as threatening, and it changed my feelings about them (a little bit).