I like it, it rhymes, has rythm, clearly has meaning to that extends past the contours of what you spell out in the prose.

I feel amused, confused, excited, a little offended for reasons im not sure i can explain, and more than anything i feel like i know something about Diyaa even if its only enough to leave me wanting to know more.

One of the best substack poems ive read so far by a long shot.

But i guess i gotta think to myself..

Am i just taking the losers' bait? 😁