As I’ve become accustomed to in your writing, the expertise is fabulous.

I might suggest that the narrator’s voice—”I” remain singular rather that occasionally switch to “we”. Keeping that stance, keeps the focus—at least for me.

Check out some of the common punctuation uses of commas, and a few references to antecedents. Nothing overwhelming, but perhaps jarring to former English teachers!!

The px are great, the whole is fine, and the blend of the personal with the scientific explication and descriptions is always a pleasure..