Mark, Again the story drew me into immediately. Your descriptions of Maggie’s experience of her discovery and her physical reaction were vivid. I really like her. However, I think I’ll have to warm up to David; he seems to be holding something back. The pacing is excellent; the academic information was necessary for the understanding of Maggie’s character and her ties to her new situation.

I’m definitely interested in learning more about these characters but again I think Maggie will be my favorite.