Thrilled to more of your writing!

Say more about why the “we’re not homeless, we’re house less” pisses you off. If this same anger is the through line - and maybe it’s just the initial motivation but not the true heart? - as a reader we want to know more here.

You very much have a book growing. The pacing for an article is a nice clip and you’ve set some vivid scenes. I see places where, with a bigger canvas, you could give texture to the other characters - including to yourself - in the story. Like, how did you feel getting this job after mostly unemployment? How did your relationships change with and without formal organizational roles?