What I’m learning through this sticky-note system I’m using to edit: I love interiority, I think it’s a strength of mine. But most of these notes (the yellow ones) are all telling me to add more of it. Even just a quick sentence to round things off will make things SO much stronger.

I can’t believe how helpful it’s been to edit this way. I feel like I’m getting so much done! Also, it’s so fun!!