When people imagined paradise they could only go so far into detail. Your short story reveals that paradise sounds boring. Like watching too much Netflix, eating too much ice cream, riding on too many unicorns. Sooner or later you get bored of the ‘good life’.

I also find the idea of paradise dangerous. It makes us believe that this Earth is just the material world in which we’re trapped for a while on our way to paradise. A nuisance. It makes us blind to the beauty of this universe that thrives with life and enables us, for the blink of a moment, to exist and take it all in.