A very well written piece.

What I like here is the atmosphere and the pull. It keeps moving like a real dream, one thing opening into the next, and that gives it a strong grip. The voice also feels steady all the way through, which matters in a piece like this.

The shift from rest, to vision, to moral weight is handled well. It carries feeling without spelling everything out. And that last question stays with you. Quiet, heavy, and honest.

Strong piece. Ambitious, vivid, and full of thought.