First of all i loved the Arabic version…It’s all Chinese to me but who cares!

What works here is the weight and the anger. It feels like a voice speaking from exhaustion, not pretending, not decorating the pain. That gives the whole piece honesty.

I also like the structure. Breaking it into parts helps the feeling grow step by step, from surrender to bitterness to something close to complete collapse. It holds together well because the emotional thread stays strong.

Dark, heavy, and very direct. It says what it wants without backing away….Good job boy!