Beautifully written. Quiet and honest in a way that feels earned. The move from trying to “practise silence” to “simply to listen” is really strong, because it shifts the whole piece out of self-improvement mode and into something gentler and more real.
I also love the idea that silence is “not the absence of sound, but the absence of struggle.” That lands beautifully. And the small everyday image, “a cup of coffee in hand, the phone left untouched on the table,” gives the whole thing a grounded, human ending. Soft, clear, and full of actual presence.