What I will say about this post, written as a first draft without polish or refinement… it fits the subject.

Grief doesn't come out polished. I can write my own book on the experience Gabriela B. is describing about grief from loss in a stream of consciousness style. The fact that it came to her in verses rather than prose is telling. Sometimes the subconscious reaches for form when the feeling is too large for sentences.

Give it a read and let her know what your thoughts are.